Wahoo, Tyler! You are the first one to blog your draft fable today! Well done. You have followed everything you have to do and written a clever fable with a great moral at the end. You should be proud of your writing. It really is almost good enough to publish…just add a few adjectives to take it to the next level and you’re done! For example: a…..crocodile, a ….river, a ….tree, ….water. I like your adjective for parrot, a rainbow parrot. I can see it. It makes your story come alive. Keep up your wonderful work.
Wahoo, Tyler! You are the first one to blog your draft fable today! Well done. You have followed everything you have to do and written a clever fable with a great moral at the end. You should be proud of your writing. It really is almost good enough to publish…just add a few adjectives to take it to the next level and you’re done!
ReplyDeleteFor example: a…..crocodile, a ….river, a ….tree, ….water. I like your adjective for parrot, a rainbow parrot. I can see it. It makes your story come alive. Keep up your wonderful work.