Friday 5 November 2021

Narrative writing


‘’My name is Levi, me and my pet Misty are the protectors of our home.’’ 

‘’I was born with superpowers and have special fighting skills. I know all forms of martial arts and have the strength of the hulk.’’

‘’Misty, is a hybrid, he is half cheetah and half eagle. He can fly and moves as fast as speed and can turns things into ice with his breath.’’


‘’Our home has beautiful mountains, lush green grass, a crystal clear lake and many unique living creatures. However, it holds a secret that have been kept from the rest of the world for centuries.’’


‘’My ancestors have captured and trapped the evil Fire Dragon in a cave on a mountain for centuries to stop it from causing harm to our kind and the humans.’’


‘’To get to our home, outsiders will have to go through the magical forest, a forest that turns into a maze. Most people don’t make it out of the maze.’’


Only a powerful immortal can possibly be strong enough to fight through the forest.


In the past many immortals have attempted to release the Fire dragon from the cave and control it and his powers to take over the world.




Goro, the most powerful Immortal has planned an attack and is going for the Fire Dragon.

He will be leading his army to Levi and Misty.


‘’I sense something bad is going to happen Misty!’’ ‘’I’m afraid it will have something to do with the Fire Dragon.’’


From a distance, Levi and Misty saw a flock of birds suddenly fly off which usually means that there is trouble nearby.


The trees then started swaying violently.

Goro and his army emerged out from the forest.


‘’I am here for the fire dragon, get out of my way, if you don’t get out of my way then I will kill you all!’’


‘’That’s not going to happen!

I’m going to stop you and your army.’’




The fight between good and evil begins!


Levi and Misty fought with all their powers but somehow Goro and his army are like zombies, they just won’t die.


‘’Misty! Let’s come up with a plan and combine our powers to defeat Goro.’’

‘’You go and distract him from the front and freeze him while I’ll sneak up from behind him and chop his head off.’’


Their plan worked, Goro was defeated, his army perished into thin air when he took his last breath.


‘’Victory.! Misty, we did it, we killed him.’’

Once again Levi and Misty saved the world.



THE END







2 comments:

  1. Namaste Tyler. What an exciting narrative about good versus evil. Your characters, Levi and Misty, used their super powers to work together. Well done to use powerful adjectives to describe their home in the mountains. Good paragraphs too. Thanks for adding a memorable picture to match your story. Keep up your great skills online Tyler. Have a fun and relaxing weekend with your family. Maybe you will go bike riding!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Kia ora Tyler. Ka pai on your writing. I agree with Mrs Butler about your awesome adjectives. I also like the way you're using lots of dialogue and speech marks although maybe you could make it a bit clearer who is saying which parts. Did you know that if you add images using the explore tool you can put png at the end of your search to get images without the backgrounds?

    ReplyDelete

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.